This isn't a love poem, and it never really was
It's telling you I was too quick
To make decisions, to think I was free
From the shackles,
from the cage of another;
and trying to explain -
The beauty of a moment
meant more to me
than you ever thought you did.
This isn't a love poem, but it was once
This is saying I forgave a long time ago
but I am the cliché and cannot forget.
But though some small part of me
wants murder
another still wants the past,
and maybe always will, I didn't learn
although I understand better.
this isn't a love poem, and i don't know if it will be
it's just letting you know
go?
that if you ever need me
you only have to reach.
again.















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That's about all I could be bothered saying when my feet hurt this much.
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conorschild: overusing commas since '73 seconds ago
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#getLIT for people who think writing is just tops
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conorschild: overusing commas since '73 seconds ago
~thingsareprettyokay
#getLIT for people who think writing is just tops
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conorschild: overusing commas since '73 seconds ago
~thingsareprettyokay
#getLIT for people who think writing is just tops
You know how I feel about this one. <3
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I LOVE NARUTO
I think there could have been more though. Verses to other people tangled in the narrator's love-torn past. To him, the one who took her from me - if there had been one. To them, who laughed at me - if they had laughed at all.
And also, some of the small comments on the last verse kind of messed the layout slightly, I think. If it had just been one comment, it would have been fine, but the extra ones changed it too much.
I love the repetition of 'This isn't a love poem', though.
And I seem to be faving everything of yours, recently, you magnificent artist, you.
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JOIN MAI CIRCUS GUYZE.
Everyone's doing it...
I cried.
¬¬
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ctJemm: Marry me, sparklepants.
This is a personal poem, about me. Truly. So, there wasn't those people. At least not affecting me right now
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conorschild: overusing commas since '73 seconds ago
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#getLIT for people who think writing is just tops
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lol, writing lol
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